Looking for suggestions to improve my ad

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Kijiji

Looking for some suggestions.
-should I remove *accident* I am an honest guy. I don't want people to waste there time

-I am not trying that hard to sell, its the wife's Idea.
is the price too high?

-I got 765 hits no inquires.

-just won best Gts-t at sky meet, guess I should put that up.

Thanks
Alex